Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Tuesday Twosome: Weird Thrills

I got the Weird Thrills comic at NYCC, and just got around to reading it.

I really enjoyed the tongue-in-cheek, pulpy quality of this adventure with a fin-de-siecle, Lovecraftian vibe. Retired and confined occult Professor Cyril Finch is amusingly ascetic and volatile, and occasionally addresses readers through the page like we're an imaginary friend, another symptom of his decline. Fun! The second part of the comic, an illustrated adaptation of Poe's The Black Cat, is just plain dark, a beautifully depicted downward spiral.

Here are two sentences from Kingdom of the Vampires: Is it mad to sense the existence of a spectral world no one else can perceive? Such madness has saved my life many times.

As to what I'm writing- Mystery Writers of America is doing its annual short story anthology (examples here), and slots are open for judged submissions by any members in good standing, regardless of publication status. Yearly, less-known or absolutely unknown writers' stories are selected to appear side-by-side with other terrific and bestselling MWA member authors who are commissioned to write stories. This makes for a strong and interesting collection, but also a wonderful opportunity. This year's anthology-- as I think of it since I'm submitting in this year-- will be published in 2010. It's being edited by the prolific Charlaine Harris, and will have a supernatural theme.

The fantastic elements are relatively open to writer interpretation, as long as the stories play fair with the reader and real detecting occurs. As you may know, the weird is always in my wheelhouse, but I'm writing a combination of mild deduction and pastiche. We'll see how it goes, but it feels better to fail big right now. Six copies of the best story ever are due to MWA by March 15th, where they'll be stripped of writer identity before a panel of 5 MWA authors judges them. Unlike most of my tightly tweaked and shaved final copy, this one's loose, slangriffic, and in the first person POV of a geeky slacker in NYC. It helps the thing get written briskly, but I don't know how they'll like it. Then again, I never do. Here are two:

In addition to creative curses, Sorry and Excuse Me are as ubiquitous as sushi places, insincere expressions of remorse that make us imagine ourselves civilized, a vital feature if you’re not going to plotz while living ass-to-elbow. So, I look back over my shoulder to receive my well-earned crust of apology, and the ragbag is actually smiling at me.

I'm working away. Let us know in the comments what's thrilling you to read and write this week.

UPDATE: David Cranmer shares essentially Western Randisi and some unnecessary modesty.
Crystal Phares offers up flinches and Darkness.
Barbara Martin gives us cliffhanging description.

20 comments:

Lois Karlin said...

I'm still reading Dune (what can I tell you!) and am doing revisions to the novel, so I can't contribute two sentences that won't bore you.

I tried to come up with something supernatural for the MWA Anthology but have not been inspired, despite my exposure to Maoris in NZ. Guess it's just not my thing. I'm glad you're submitting, though, and best best best of luck with it! If the rest of the story is as creative as what you've written here, it must be a fascinating piece.

David Cranmer said...

Ah, WEIRD THRILLS is my type of poison. Enjoy.

Clare2e said...

I forgot to mention from your last related post- I LOVE Dune! So dense and layered a creation. Hope you're still loving it.

To be perfectly honest, I know a lot of crime writers who don't do the woo-woo, and I'm selfishly hoping that a lower number of submissions helps my chances. I can use it.

Laura K. Curtis said...

I read Karen Rose's Die for Me this week, and it was excellent. Unfortunately, I don't have it at hand at the moment to give you two sentences.

Two I wrote:
She’d showered while he slept, and her hair hung in a damp fall of curls over her shoulder. Someone had given her a pair of scrubs decorated with balloons so bright her fair skin turned ghostly in comparison.

David Cranmer said...

Laura, Excellent imagery and funny too. I'm picturing these balloon scrubs.

Laura K. Curtis said...

Thanks, David. I am not sure what it is about those superbright scrubs, but I've woken up in the hospital wincing at the sight of them a couple of times!

Clare2e said...

I like yours, Laura. In my unsold MS, I make comments about the crazy cartoon scrubs, too. For me, they're vaguely eerie not cheery.

I read Scream for Me and it wasn't bad. Did you find Die for Me even better and why? Discuss. Compare and Contrast...

Clare2e said...

Um, Lois, surely the novel you're revising has sentences!

Charles Gramlich said...

Definitely sounds pretty good.

Crystal Phares said...

Clare, I love mysterious, crime filled woo-woo! I so can't write in first person. I end up confusing myself. Your lines are great.

Crystal Phares said...

Laura & Clare - I liked Die For Me more than Scream For Me. To me, the pacing was faster, and the plot (again this is just my lowly opinion) was more intense.

Laura K. Curtis said...

Ooops...I misspoke. It's Kill For Me I just read. The major problem I have with any of these books that have a continuing storyline is that you may forget some of the plot or characters between books. Kill for Me is the best of the lot, I think. You can read it without reading any of the others, but playing catchup would be difficult.

ARCHAVIST said...

Ballon scrubs!

Barbara Martin said...

Thanks for the heads-up on the anthology. That would be fun to read. I'm into wierd thrills, too.

Your two are decidedly wierd and enticing.

My two sentences are up, and sorry for being late to notify, again.

Laura K. Curtis said...

Archavis - why is it everyone is familiar with those hideous scrubs? It must say something about our audience...

Barbara Martin said...

Laura, I can see the balloon scrubs perfectly on the character you described. Scrub tops come in all sorts of designs now, and you picked one that suited you.

Kathleen Ryan said...

I’m going to jump right in and give it a try...

Here are two from Annie Dillard’s The Writing Life:

If you were a Zulu warrior banging on your shield with your spear for a couple of hours along with a hundred other Zulu warriors, you might be able to prepare yourself to write. If you were an Aztec maiden who knew months in advance that on a certain morning the priests were going to throw you into a hot volcano, and if you spent those months undergoing a series of purification rituals and drinking dubious liquids, you might, when the time came, be ready to write.

Here are mine, from my W-I-P, a true crime memoir:

His responses sounded rehearsed -- as if he had prepared for this moment for nearly forty-seven years -- and that he assumed his carefully chosen words would prevent him from becoming the focus of the investigation.

Somehow, throughout his decades of practice, I don’t think he could ever have anticipated that the first law enforcement officer to pose such questions to him would turn out to be his own daughter-in-law.

Clare2e said...

Barbara- I linked to yours.

Kathy- Thanks for sharing yours. It's a fascinating story you've got. Did you mean Dillard's examples of writing preparation to tie into your own description of your father-in-law's years of preparation to be asked the tough questions? Bet you did, clever minx.

Kathleen Ryan said...

Hi Clare,

I wish I could claim that to be true; I'm guessing my subconscious must be working overtime, though! You, dear friend, are the clever minx for making the connection! Bravo!

Gail Stockton said...

I wish you luck getting your story picked for the MWA anthology.