Saturday, April 12, 2008

On Prologues

I seem to be reading a spate of books of late that have completely pointless prologues. I realize the custom in the suspense genre these days is to open with some poor innocent being captured or killed by a serial killer so that we can see just how deviant the "baddie" is (or so the author can then relax a little, having already shown you the basic plot and stressed you out) and I've gotten used to that. I've even written a prologue for my romantic suspense, though it's not nearly so involved as some. (I posted a draft of it a while back, here, and while it's undergone some revisions since then, it hasn't become much more elaborate.)

I didn't have a prologue at first, but as I wrote, I realized that I wanted the reader to know that Nicole was dead long before the characters became certain of it. I wanted them looking for clues before the characters did, and that was the sole purpose of the prologue.

But the past few books I've read, I wonder why the authors bothered with the prologues and why no editor told them the book would be stronger without one.

  • In one case, the prologue--which occurs more than a hundred years before the rest of the book--shows the discovery of an archaeological find. One of the artifacts is stolen later in the book, which forms the basis of the mystery/suspense, but nothing dramatic happens during the find, nothing vital that is not explained more than once later on in the story.
  • The prologue of another book, taking place nearly ten years before the rest of the story, depicts the main character witnessing a murder as a child. The event is definitely life-altering, and you do need to know about it to understand the protagonist, but it's recalled so many times in the book, in dreams, in discussions, etc, that I got bored with all the repetition.
  • The third actually takes place after the book begins. That is, Chapter 1 is dated earlier than the prologue. You get the prologue again later on in the book.

None of these is unique to the book in question. I've seen all these techniques used more than once (and the list is far from complete--certain styles of prologue get used regularly). However, reading these three books one right after another really brought question of a prologue into focus for me. All these books are by "name" authors (I'm too lazy to see whether they all qualify as "best sellers"), who've been writing and publishing for years, and now I want to go back and see whether they've always incorporated these introductory bits with information readers get again later on, or whether there's some sort of trend that's making them feel they need to have them.

I am a careful reader, so if I get information in a prologue, I don't want it again in the body of the book. If characters are going to discuss in detail a crime that's taken place, I don't need to see it being committed--you don't have to show the blood spilling first if you're going to give me two pages of spatter analysis later on down the road. (On the other hand, if you do show the spillage, that's fine...just give me a single sentence about what the spatter analyst had to say when the time comes.)

On television, there's a minute or two of story before the titles roll. Often, in shows like Cold Case, Without a Trace, Criminal Minds, the crime takes place in that first spot, and the rest of the show is an investigation into it. Sometimes, further crimes take place during the show, but there's a teaser up front, and that's how I often feel about the prologues in suspense novels. Maybe that's actually why I don't even notice the "serial killer grabs a victim" prologue any more; I'm so used to it from television.

So I wonder...how do the rest of you feel about prologues? Do you have particular types you like or particular ones that make you crazy? And what about epilogues, while we're at it?

8 comments:

Clare2e said...

I remember a particularly vexing prologue from a BIG NAME author mentioning a piece of music and character that wouldn't recur for 2/3 of the book. By then, it wasn't at all the driving factor behind the investigation and I didn't care about the new character either. But I spent a large part of the first half of the book waiting for the prologue info to tie in and matter, and it never really did. Very frustrating.

It's like Chekhov's gun quote:
"If a gun is on the mantle in the first act, it must go off in the third." But with prologues, I think the fuse is shorter. I think the prologue has to be proven essential in the first act/first third of the book. Otherwise, you're stringing readers along unnecessarily or being repetitive.

I do have a prologue in my dark thriller and it's a 300-word, scene-setter that shows a shrouded, flower-chained corpse on the side of the road. I wanted to show the more rural landscape and to set the reader up for the especial creepiness to come. That body is kilt in the first chapter and discovered by page 60, ending what I think of as Act I. And still and still, I fought with keeping the prologue.

I'm interested to read how other people use them and decide whether to keep them. I've been involved in many critiques where they got axed for all the reasons you said, Laura.

Laura (Kramarsky) Curtis said...

Oh, gah, Clare, that would have driven me mad, always waiting for the music....

And yet, just when you say "axe all prologues!" you realize that sometimes, like your tone-setting situation, they're necessary.

Elaine Will Sparber said...

Prologues were "out" for a while. Editors and agents tended to say to get rid of them. But they've made a comeback.

How do I feel about them? It depends on how well they're written and incorporated into the story. I don't like prologues that are there just for the sake of being there. I also don't like prologues that were originally chapter 4 but moved up because the agent or editor ordered it--to start in the middle of the action, for example. If the story was adjusted to compensate, fine. But usually you can tell right away what the writer did.

Epilogues I don't mind so much. If I don't need to know what happened after the crime is solved or the situation resolved, I just skip it. I drive my husband crazy because I've read Stephen King's Dead Zone twice plus watched the movie and still have never read/watched the last chapter or two. And I'm one who reads acknowledgments and dedications.

Lois Karlin said...

Here's my question.

Long ago I wrote a prologue for my novel...to establish the relationship between two characters and show a revealing bit of backstory...on the assumption that a picture is worth a thousand words.

It's an unusual setting, surprising, but has nothing to do with the actual mystery, and it's not essential. It's a little like Dennis LeHane's italicized one-page prologues about his childhood (in Darkness Take My Hand he follows the italicized bit with yet another prologue!)...used to subtly and succinctly show part of the protagonist's motive for sleuthing.

At some point (having learned that readers are impatient with prologues) I dropped mine. The file is probably on some retired PC and God knows where I'd find it now. But I keep thinking about resurrecting it.

I'd be interested to know what y'all think. Do I send this thing off to agents with or without prologue?

Laura (Kramarsky) Curtis said...

Elaine - I guess it's true that everything goes in cycles!

Lois - It sounds as if that's something worth bringing to a critique group, like the prologue and first chapter or something so people could get a sense of how the prologue and story fit together and how the book "feels" with and without.

Elaine Will Sparber said...

Lois- It wouldn't hurt to show it to your agent or editor after you've gotten one, then put it in or leave it out as he/she recommends. But if you feel iffy about it in any way, don't include it in the partial when you're trying to find an agent or editor. Those first few pages are too crucial.

pattinase (abbott) said...

I am especially turned off by a prologue where you don't who's talking a you don't find out for a hundred pages and you spend all kinds of time trying to figure it out.

Laura (Kramarsky) Curtis said...

Pattinase -

Especially when the author goes through all kinds of awkwardness so you don't even know the sex of the speaker. It's so rare to find an author who can do this (though I know there are some, because I have read them, I just don't remember who at the moment).