Last weekend I attended a party for a dear friend’s eightieth birthday. It was hardly a surprise that the subject of writing came up.
First, my eighty-year old friend (Cristopher Dell) is both a published writer himself and the son of Floyd Dell…novelist, playwright, poet, and one time lover of Edna St. Vincent Millay. (Note that it is Floyd’s wife B whom I recall fondly, not Millay!)
Second, some of us read toasts that we’d prepared for Cris. Among such brainy folk, we reached for erudition.
Our lovely but devilish hostess had carefully arranged place cards, seating ten or twelve of us on a long bench behind two tables where – since we couldn’t escape – we engaged with unlikely neighbors. I found myself next to one of the birthday boy’s sons-in-law, a cinematographer of some renown, who had heard rumors I was writing a novel. “Just a mystery,” said I, modestly. “But I’m writing mysteries too,” said he. “I’m on my fourth!”
Enchanted to have discovered a passion in common, we compared sub-genres, word-length, agents, and writing challenges. His stories have a more international flavor than mine. They’re longer. (Pissing contest…a first for me!) He’s found an agent, while I’ve merely sent out tentative feelers. We both, however, write blind. That is, he sits at his laptop with a piece of blank paper covering the screen. And I – an accurate touch typist – sometimes sit at my own with closed eyes.
In essence it’s free-writing we’re doing, although both of us sustain the technique for longer stretches than do most free-writers (who actually set a time limit). He finds that he’s less inhibited when he drafts scenes this way, and only removes the taped paper for revising and editing. I use it when drafting new scenes myself, but the technique also comes in handy for revising a scene I find dead on the page. Or I'll do it to channel a character...to position myself behind her eyes instead of my own.
Another goal, I suppose, is right-brain fluency. It amounts to following one’s pen across the page in order to circumvent the censor. To prevent words from blocking expression of under-the-surface ideas. To layer ideas, as in brainstorming, without the critic’s nay-saying interference.
Typing super fast works too, but it’s dangerous for anyone whose typing skills leave something to be desired. I found myself barreling through the novel’s climax throughout my latest round of revisions, approaching warp speed at the keyboard. In similar vein my sister, who used to paint, has picked up her brush again recently, practicing a technique called "point zero" painting. She says this method doesn't focus on the product “but on the process of continually surrendering the mind to a more child-like state to allow intuition to be heard.” How cool is that!
I had a few additional things in common with my cinematographer friend from the party. We’re both MWA members. We find mystery writers sterling folks. We both envy Bouchercon 2007 attendees who even now are wending their way to Anchorage for tomorrow’s conference. (I hear next year’s is in Baltimore. For two mystery fledglings – both DC natives – an east coast venue seems less daunting.)
So what techniques do you recommend for keeping the critic at bay and unleashing the wild writer inside?
- Lois


7 comments:
Never heard of "writing blind" before. Sadly for me, if I did that, I would probably just assume keep the blank sheet over the product afterwards as well. My typing isn't that accurate.
Sounds like a fun dinner, you one-upping pissee.
I like my yearly NaNoWriMo: National Novel Writing Month when participants pledge to write 50,000 words (a short novel's worth) during November. No time to fret or think, just blather on and see what shows up. The slogan is No Rules, Just Write
www.nanowrimo.org
However, on a regular basis, I find free writing kind of stressful, because I have loads of developing ideas already banging around inside, and it's the execution that challenges me more than finding raw material. That's not to say that I'm not thankful when surprises happen in the writing and shake up my strategies. Once a year, but intensely, is about all I can stand of intentionally blank pages.
Alex - I'd suggest using a pen and just writing really fast, but I'm not sure you'd be able to decipher that any better. (I guess maybe I coined the term 'writing blind.')
Clare - I cannot begin to imagine writing 50,000 words in a month. Plus you do Crimebake! How? How? How! do you do it! From my brief experience writing really fast I can see that it might enable fresh things to happen. But that number of words? Man!
During Nanowrimo, when your tank's on empty with thousands of syllables to go, the sweetest three little words are: Flashback, Dream Sequence.
To be honest, I've never "won" as they say. I pledge, but haven't made it yet. Around 1/5 do, I think. Maybe this year? But I did write over 33,000 in my best showing and that was worth something. In fact, it's always worth something to try, because I get further than if I'd done nothing, like my usual November in cryogenic suspension until Thanksgiving.
Are you Crimebaking this year?
Lois,
Sounds like a great dinner party.
I love the idea of writing blind, but would be surprised if I could pull it off. I am not the world's greatest typist and am more comfortable if I can check as I go along.
I do write freely, that is, without any written outline, and occasionally have done "stream of consciousness" writing for practice.
Terrie
Clare - I am Crime Baking. And you? And in spite of it, I'm following your lead...I'm gonna take the NaNoWriMo challenge, which means I'd better get started thinking about that next book!
Terrie - any tricks up your sleeve for getting inside the heads of characters? It would be nice not to have to shut my eyes....
Lois,
I don't think I have any tricks, I just really really know the main characters before I start writing. The minor characters do trick me once in a while because I don't know them as well before I start to write.
Sometimes when I am writing and get to know a minor character better, I realize that I have her/him wrong and have to redo them with a name change, appearance change or dialog change.
Terrie
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