Wednesday, May 30, 2007

Raising Emotional Stakes: Taking a Lesson from The Matador

Thank God for DVDs. I didn’t catch The Matador when it was released in theaters over a year ago. Then again, back then I probably wouldn’t have recognized the terrific lesson the film offers fiction writers. A lesson, that is, in developing seedy characters that readers find themselves loving despite more refined inclinations. In this movie we not only identify with a truly vulgar hit man – we find ourselves rooting for the kill.

Lest ye doubt, allow me to enumerate the many fine qualities with which this character arrives on stage. He’s rude. He’s crude. And yes, he is lewd.

Let me say right up front that if you’re likely to be offended by soulless standup sex – even if it is performed by Pierce Brosnan – you might want to give this film a miss. You’ll lose out on something special if you do, however. Because we begin to know this guy just as soon as we see his mechanical, off-hand, misogynist attempts to de-stress following each kill (he might as well be f___ing a mannequin). The camera work’s not pornographic, nor remotely titillating. This part’s not filmed to shock so much as to help us get this character.

Writer/Director Richard Shepherd takes advantage of our expectations for the stereotypical assassin. In fact he counts on our expectations in order to build emotional tension. He draws us in because the guy’s so not like we are (right?) and we’re repelled at the same time we’re curious. We’re not certain what this guy’s gonna do, and we’re more than a little worried about it. In fact we’re downright uncomfortable. (I particularly enjoy watching this kind of film – in some ways like Pulp Fiction though not nearly as bloody – with my spouse. When I’m disturbed, I know he’s about ready to get up and leave the room.)

Shepherd draws an exaggerated character, but he does so with a light touch. This makes him interesting without turning him into a caricature. And then the director starts to play against the stereotype. We learn that our truly offensive assassin’s lonely. He’s kind of anxious to please a guy that he meets in a bar, a polar-opposite niceguy played by Greg Kinnear. Still repelled by our assassin, we don’t know what to make of him. But his poor social skills are so over the top that we’re fascinated, so we stick around to see what he’ll do when the director forces these unlikely buddies to interact.

Here’s where we get well and truly hooked. We’re not watching a transformation – our hit man doesn’t lose his undesirable traits – so much as we’re starting to make excuses for the guy. He so wants to make up for his bad behavior that we’re relieved when Kinnear gives him a second chance. He tosses off whoppers so effortlessly we’re willing to believe him. He’s so inept in all matters besides f___ing and killing that we’re disarmed right along with Kinnear.

Since I don’t want to give away the ending, I’ll need to be careful here...no more fun details! Shepherd layers on the vulnerabilities through both action and back story. Finally, we get the twist, the masterful flaw that’s so unexpected – one that so beautifully plays against the stereotype – that we’re totally identified. And it’s startling. Because we find ourselves in our assassin’s shoes at a most unsavory moment.

Nothing dull about this movie. And yet it’s not at all your typical action film. I’m totally impressed, because it achieves what I hope to – someday - in my own stories... characterization so riveting that the plot’s at once surprising and inevitable.

–Lois

7 comments:

Terrie Farley Moran said...

Lois, I promised on your Feel the Fear post that I would mail five query packages by the day after Memorial Day. I did mail one yesterday (right on time)and the good news is that I will mail the other four this afternoon. It took longer than I thought. Putting together just the right package for each agent feeds my obsession to "get things right."

As soon as I finish that chore, I'm going to rent The Matador.

In my first draft of Driven to Death, the identity of the murderer was so obvious because I had endowed that character with nothing but annoying and undesirable character traits. When I read the first draft straight through, I couldn't believe what I had done.

Revisions! Revisions! By the final, the character was somewhat likeable and had faded from the neon "I must be the bad one."

Terrie

Nan Higginson said...

Lois,

WOW! You'd make a mint as a movie critic, and I'll bet your insight into manuscript flaws and gems is equally impressive. Do you work for hire?

I just read your posting to my hubby and will likely run out to the local library to see if I can scrounge it up for viewing later tonight.

Thanks for the superb examination of the layering done in The Matador. I, too, hope to some day be able to make my characters irresistable.

Write On!
Nan

Lois Karlin said...

Terrie, I know just what you mean about obsessing over getting your packages for agents just right. I believe we are not alone in this, as writers!

Nan, I'm no critic...I just got excited by this movie because somehow it felt so fresh but at the same time so obviously played on audience expectations. And I realized that as writers we can do the same. That is, if we learn to be quite clever....

Clare2e said...

I loved this movie, too! And also found it refreshing that the story didn't move the married couple where you thought it might, if the story had been Hollywood-predictable. It wasn't, and the volatility and dark humor really kept me hooked.

Gorelets said...

Awesome post... Matador was a complete surprise to me and you've nailed what I think I liked about it (as well as the issues it raised for me). I like this blog -- learned about it on librarything.com -- really, keep up the good work.

-- Michael Arnzen, gorelets.com

Terrie Farley Moran said...

Lois, I did rent The Matador and you are so right. The characterizations were wonderful. No one was stereotypical. I am going to watch it again before I return it. I know I can learn a lot about how to reveal my characters bit by surprising bit just by watching this film.

Thanks for a great post and an excellent writing lesson. Terrie

Lois Karlin said...

Michael Arnzen, your response won my subscription to The Goreletter. And I'm dying to know just where on librarything.com you found a mention of the Women of Mystery!